Monday, January 10, 2011

Writing Chain^^

Writing Chain ^^: "Once upon a time...." by Class 21.
Hello! Welcome back to my blog~
Today I wrote a Writing Chain and wrote a funny story.
Some parts I didn't like at all, but when you put it altogether,
I think it's pretty cool.
Anyway, enjoy my story!
















 

 Once upon a time there was a famous actress. She was a beautiful and a lovely actress, but she retired. So she lived in a small city that was quite known. One day she was walking in the street, listening to her IPod, she got hit by a bus. She broke an arm so all she could do was breathe and sleep.
 Then one very boring afternoon, she heard a noise. When she followed the sound, she found a girl in the bathroom. She was practicing her singing infront of the mirror. When the girl saw the actress she was very surprised. The girl thought that herself wasn't a good singer and she got very red. So the actress suggested to the girl that she will help her to sing and act. The actress couldn't move very well yet, but the girl needed to go to an audition for a musical of Harry Potter. They thought and thought and thought some more. Finally the girl said " I don't think that I need your help. Furthermore, you are very uncomfortable to move or talk yet." Then the girl left the actress and went away from the actress. The actress was crushed. She was so shocked that she didn't eat or drink for a week and passed away....
Back to the girl: she practiced a lot for the audition but the ghost of the actress still hated that girl. So everyday and night he haunted the girl. The girl got very scared to sing sometimes. But despite her fear, she went to the audition. But she was crushed. The building was on fire and they canceled the audition to later. Nobody knew why there was a fire but she knew. 'This ghost must be having a revenge on me! She must be really hating me,' thought the girl. So the girl and her friend went to find the actress but she was gone. Angry because the ghost ruined her once in a life chance away, she decided to do one last thing. It was called "Goot". She heard that this is a way of thanking ghosts and praying to them. It's a Korean tradition. So she set the table with Korean food and prayed very very dearly. Suddenly, the ghost appeared. 'I hated it when you just left me in the bathroom. So when I died I put a curse on you. But now I hear you praying so I will forgive you.' Then it disappeared.
Things went well the day after that. She passed the audition for Harry Potter and she got the part for Hermione. The musical went well. She was now good friends with Harry, Ginny, and Ron. After the musical they had a wild party. When she was about to say thanks to Harry, she saw that this Harry was Daniel Radcliffe!! The other characters, too. Rupert Grint, Bonnie Wright, Tom Felton and others!! She was so happy^^ Thankfully nobody heard a whispery voice saying "That magic worked^^"

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